Rainbowmeleon trapped by Tentacruel (part 1)

I developed a new skill that makes my digital drawings better by hand drawing it first.... high chance this may be integrated into the manga..

After defeating the fairy type gym leader, Pinkie Pie, a mysterious voice that sounded like Flash Sentry's (which it is) yelled Tentacruel, use bind, time for a little fun....
 : Elijah, a Tentacruel captured Rainbow Dash just seconds after you beat me!
 : I still energy to fight!
Elijah: Thanks Pinkies, but This is a fight I'm going in with all I got.
 : Ok, be careful...
Elijah: I will... Hang in there Rainbow, I'm coming baby.
seconds later...
 : This isn't funny, let me go! I have a boyfriend!
???: Oh, that Elijah whatever his last name is, yeah I know him, that's why you're the bait....
 : No.. Stop.
Elijah: RAINBOW!
 : ELIJAH! HELP! HE'S TRYING TO KILL YOU! SAVE ME!
Elijah: Who?
 : That's HE with a capitol h btw...
Elijah: Flash? Are you still peeved about me beating you? If that's what this is about... that's wack dude.
 : Partially, mostly cause of how you're able to win over all the best girls, including Twilight...
 : I didn't want to have to do this, but I figured that if the captive is someone....
 : Someone you value more than anything or anyone, and the perfect bait is.... (drum roll)
 : Rainbow Dash! I must say you do have a sexy fiance... so, tell me your secrets as to how you the girls crazy for you-
 : MIND YOUR BUSINESS! YOU- GAAAAAAH!
 : Or Tentacruel gets your "happy ending"..
Elijah: Release her, first!
 : Let's see what the pony me thinks about that.
 : How can we trust you're not just gonna run off with her?
 : Flash- LET- ME- GO! (moans)
Elijah: RELEASE HER! (blushes)
 : You love it.. I bet her moans are weakening you.. What about your pony self Elijah, where he at? I'd like to go hoof to hoof again, but rescuing your sexy princess fiance is gonna be harder than it needs to be, we can negotiate all day, our answer still stands.
 : (moans) Elijah... uh uh.. kick thier- AAH BAD TOUCH!
Elijah: Rainbow.... My whole team, Eevee, Dorascoon, Derageon, Larvino, Z-meleon! guys, can you guys keep Flash at bay long enough? I'll take Tentacruel and save Rainbow Dash.
 : This'll be my appetizer.. (licks lips)
 : Alright Flash, use steel wing on all including Elijah if possible, if you get hit.. Use roost. Tentacruel, double team on Rainbow Dash!
 : (moans) Oh gah- no! help please.. (screams)